Short Story: Red Snowballs - Bruce Kirkpatrick
Bruce Kirkpatrick is a contemporary author of fiction and non-fiction stories.
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Short Story: Red Snowballs

I’m working on a book of short stories. Here’s one from the collection. I’d love your feedback.

Red Snowballs

“You look sad today, Gretchen,” Tommy said. The two sat on the playground grass, and he held a small truck in his hand.

She looked up and frowned

“That’s because my momma’s sad.”

“Why is she sad?” he asked, looking at the truck but not making it push dirt or unload what he imagined it had gathered.

“I’m not sure.”

“She didn’t tell you? Did you ask her?”

“She and my papa tried to explain it to me, but I really didn’t know what they were talking about. Something about a man named Luke.”

Tommy had an uncle named Luke, but he lived far away, and he was pretty sure Gretchen wasn’t talking about him.

“Is Luke your uncle or something?” he asked.

“No. He’s a disease.”

Tommy knew that word. His momma used it whenever he didn’t feel good. But he didn’t know any man like that.

“Like a bad man or something?”

“Yes, very bad according to my momma. And he’s in my body. He invaded my body.”

That didn’t make any sense to Tommy. He wanted to ask how a man could be inside the body of his friend, but he didn’t even know how to ask. And he didn’t want to sound dumb to her. He’d liked Gretchen ever since he saw her in first grade, and he would rather play with her than some of his buddies. At least most of the time.

He knew one way to try and comfort her, “My papa is a doctor. Maybe he can…find a way…to make you all better.”

She brightened at that. “But I already have a doctor. He wears a white coat.”

“My papa is a special doctor. Is your doctor special?”

She shrugged.

“Maybe that would make my momma feel better, too,” she finally said.

Tommy smiled back at her. “My papa can make anybody feel better. He’s the best doctor ever. Just you wait and see.”

Then Tommy remembered that he and Gretchen had promised not to tell their secrets to anyone. Not even their mommas and papas. They made that promise to each other the day they had held hands in line at the museum on the field trip. Nobody had noticed and they didn’t think it was wrong, but still they made a pact not to tell anybody. Forever and ever.

“Can I tell him about this man Luke?” he asked, picking up the truck and inspecting the wheels.

“Yes,” she whispered, “but only him. Okay?”

Tommy nodded and put the truck back on the ground and began to imagine it pushing a big load of dirt off the playground grass.

 

That evening Tommy’s momma hunched over the kitchen sink finishing up the dinner dishes. She rolled her neck first to the right and then to the left and cocked her head in that direction and held it there. Then she pushed her chin to the sky. As she contorted her head in all directions, Tommy’s papa looked up from his newspaper.

Tommy colored in his Spiderman book alongside his papa at the dining room table.

“When you’re done, come join me on the couch,” Papa said to his momma as he moved to the nearby sofa.

“Can I come, too?” Tommy asked.

“Sure, buddy.” Papa pointed to the coffee table in front of him. “You can color here, if you promise not to get crayon marks on the table.”

“I promise,” Tommy said, sitting on his knees in front of the wooden table.

Momma ruffled his hair as she plopped down beside her husband.

“Long day?” he asked as he grabbed her hand and kissed it. Tommy knew it smelled like the coconut lotion she always added after doing the dishes.

She nodded and began to stretch her neck again.

“Headache?” he asked.

“Yes, Mr. Wizard, care to dissolve it for me?” Momma answered, smiling directly at him.

“It’s my heart’s desire, my love.”

“Just so you know, it’s not one of those migraines. I haven’t felt one of those in a long time. This is just a stress headache. Long day at work, you know?”

Tommy kept coloring but looked back at his parents often.

“Get comfortable,” Papa instructed. “And take a few deep breaths. Again.”

His momma lay back against the cushions and began breathing deeply as Tommy stopped coloring and turned to watch. He’d seen this before but somehow it seemed more important after his talk with Gretchen on the playground.

“Tell me precisely where your head hurts,” Papa asked.

“On the right side, starting at the top of my scalp and extending all the way into my neck and along my shoulder.”

“What color is it?”

“Black,” she immediately answered.

“What shape is it?”

“That’s a hard one. It’s like a flat piece of paper, black construction paper, crumbled on both ends. And another piece of smaller paper along my neck.”

“Is the shape thick or thin?” Papa asked. “Describe the depth of the shape.”

“About four or five inches thick.”

“Okay, good. We have the location, color and shape. Now let’s see if anything has changed. More deep breathes, please.”

Now Tommy had turned completely around and was sitting on the table, looking first at Momma and seeing the pain in her closed eyes. Then he looked Papa, whose eyes were pointed toward the ceiling. Tommy turned around to see what his papa might be looking at.

“Now tell me where the pain is,” Papa asked again.

Momma hesitated this time and her head shifted, first to the right, then to the left. “It’s now on my right side from the top of my head to about my right ear.”

Tommy saw the pain in Momma’s eyes go away.

“What color is it?”

“Green, emerald green.”

“What shape?”

“A rectangle, but not too thick, maybe an inch or two.”

This time Momma took a few more deeps breaths without any instruction from Papa. Tommy remembered her saying something about it wasn’t her first rodeo the last time she did this, but he didn’t know what horses had to do with a headache. He’d ask later, when this was all over, but he knew better than to interrupt when Papa was at work.

“Now how big is it?” Papa asked.

“About the size of a baseball. But flat.”

“And the color?”

“Yellowish.”

“Location?”

“Just at the side of my head near my right ear.”

Another pause was punctuated by more deep breathes.

“Size?” Papa asked, looking directly at her but keeping still.

“Golf ball.”

“Color?”

“White,” Momma said.

“Location?”

Momma didn’t answer. Tommy saw her turn her head back and forth, back and forth.

Finally, she said, “The location is gone.” She leaned over to give Papa a kiss. Tommy turned away, smiling.

“I love when you do that, thank you so much,” she said, snuggling close to him and clasping his hand in hers.

“Heart’s desire.” They kissed again and Tommy colored a girl that Spiderman was talking to, giving her emerald green hair.

 

Later that evening, Tommy lay on his bed with his papa beside him. From his back he looked up at the ceiling and the underside of a book that his papa was reading. Every character in the story sounded different as Papa read faster and faster, like a roller coaster running down the tracks, gaining speed.

After the story, his papa and Tommy usually talked about their day. Tommy would share something about school and his papa would share something—and it often sounded like magic—that happened in his medical practice. When the talking was done and Papa suspected that Tommy was drifting off to sleep, his son asked a question that started them into a brand-new conversation.

“Is a headache a disease?” Tommy asked.

“In a way, yes, I suppose you could call it a disease. But usually a small one that goes away quickly.”

Tommy looked like he wanted to ask the next question, but he had trouble putting it into words.

“Why do you ask son?”

“You know my friend Gretchen? She has a disease.”

“I’m sorry to hear that,” his papa said, sliding down next to Tommy. “Did she say what kind of disease?”

He nodded. “She said her disease was a man named Luke and that he had invaded her body.”

“Luke, huh? Does Luke have a last name, Tommy?”

“Yeah, Gretchen thinks it’s ‘creamy’.”

“Creamy like ice cream, that kind of creamy?” Papa asked.

Tommy nodded again but was having trouble keeping his eyes open.

Papa didn’t say anything more, but he was frowning like he usually did when he was thinking really hard. His pulled the covers up to Tommy’s chin and turned off the light.

 

The next morning at breakfast, Papa suggested that Tommy invite Gretchen over to their house after school to play and to stay for dinner. Momma would call Gretchen’s mother and make all the arrangements. Tommy said he’d like that very much. And so, the arrangements were all set. Papa said he had an idea.

Mama made meatloaf, mashed potatoes and green beans for dinner. After they ate, they went into the TV room and they all settled on the floor. Papa said he had a game he wanted them to play.

“Let’s play a game of good guys versus bad guys. It’s a game that’s all imagination. You can make up anything you want and you each can play. Okay?” Papa began.

Both kids looked at each other and shrugged.

“Oh, I forgot to tell you. This is a magical, special game. Only you two can see the game and it’ll just be your secret. Sound good?” Papa asked, smiling.

This time both kids sat up straight and smiled at each other.

“Now, let’s figure out what to call the good guys.”

“Goodies,” Tommy shouted.

“Avengers!” Gretchen shouted a little louder.

Tommy liked that better and they all agreed to call the good guys the Avengers. “Let’s put the Avengers in red uniforms,” Papa suggested.   “Okay?”

Tommy looked at Gretchen, and both kids nodded enthusiastically.

“Now, what shall we name the bad guys?”

Gretchen and Tommy thought hard, their little faces scrunched up.

Suddenly, a name popped into Tommy’s head, “The Meanies.”

“That’s a good one, Tommy,” Gretchen said, patting him on the shoulder. Papa looked like he wanted to smile.

“Okay, it’s settled, the Avengers versus the Meanies,” Papa declared. “Let’s put the Meanies in white uniforms, okay?”

“Sure, like those bad guys in Star Wars,” Tommy said. “Are the Avengers gonna go to war with the Meanies?”

“Oh, I don’t like war,” Gretchen said.

“Okay, I understand, not many people do, Gretchen,” Papa responded. “especially, little girls. Let me ask you a question. If you wanted to make sure the good guys, the red Avengers got rid of all the bad guys, the white Meanies, how do you see that happening?” Papa looked at Gretchen and put his hand up to keep Tommy quiet.

Gretchen put her hand under her chin and began to think. She squinted and she looked off into the far side of the room. Tommy couldn’t see what she was looking at. It was quiet in the den, so no sounds at all interrupted the game.

“I don’t know,” she finally said. Tommy let out a big sigh. He didn’t know the answer either.

“Let me ask it another way. If we wanted to turn all the white guys into red guys, how would that happen?” Papa asked.

“Snowballs,” Gretchen blurted out. “Red snowballs.”

Tommy looked to his papa and he nodded back at the boy.

“We could have a snowball fight. The Avengers could toss snowballs at the Meanies and every time we hit one, they would turn red,” Tommy said, smiling and feeling happy with his idea.

“Yes,” Gretchen said, “we could make lots of snowballs and keep them in a red snowball fort and whenever we saw a Meanie coming at us, we could just throw a snowball and turn them all red.”

“That’s pretty cool. I like that,” Papa said.

They spent the next half hour playing an imaginary game of Red Snowball. Tommy liked to lob snowballs in the air and see them fall on a Meanie, turning it red. Gretchen decided to roll the red orbs at the white guys, like bowling. They both liked building big red snowmen and Tommy could see a giant snowman hurling the red snowballs every which way, like a robot with two arms rapid-firing snowballs. Gretchen just imagined these big red snowmen blocking the way for the guys in white, not letting them pass, like a patrol guard at school.

Papa watched the kids play their game as his idea began to take shape. Then he called an end to the game, and Momma served hot cocoa. They let the kids out in the snow to make a few real snowballs and throw them at the tree. She heard them yell “red snowballs” often. Tommy even asked if he could use the ketchup from the cupboard, but he couldn’t persuade her.

Later, snuggling in bed with Momma, Papa whispered, “Now I have talk to her parents. I’m sure that Luke and creamy mean leukemia. They need to know what I know.” That night, he seemed to dream in reds and whites.

 

A few days later, Papa came face-to-face with Gretchen’s parents. He didn’t know them well, having only exchanged several polite hellos at school functions.

After a few pleasantries, including letting them know that he knew about their daughter’s condition, Papa began, “I’d like to work with Gretchen.”

“We already have a physician,” Gretchen’s father said, suspicion in his voice.

“I’m not an oncologist, I’m a family doctor,” Papa explained.

“Gretchen doesn’t need another doctor,” Gretchen’s mother whispered. “Our daughter needs…a miracle.”

“I believe miracles happen every day. Some we see, others go unnoticed because we are looking elsewhere,” Papa said with his best bedside manner. “If you let me work a bit with Gretchen, I won’t promise miracles, but I’ve been developing techniques to approach disease from a mental standpoint.”

“A mental standpoint?” Gretchen’s father said. “Our daughter is only seven years old. She doesn’t have a mental standpoint.”

Papa raised his hands as if defending himself. “Poor choice of words. I should have used the term ‘imagination’ in combating disease.”

“Like what, you just imagine it goes away and poof, it’s gone?” the father said, his eyes wide with mock wonder, his head bobbing from side to side.

Papa spent ten minutes explaining the power of the mind to heal the body. As Papa spoke in a low and melodious tone, Gretchen’s parents began to calm and eventually ask questions.

“You really think this approach will work?” her mother asked.

“I’ve seen it work for minor ailments, but I’ve never tried it with cancer, so there can be no guarantees,” Papa answered.

“I don’t know if I can put myself through experimentation at this point. If we lose her…I’ll simply die,” Gretchen’s mother began to sob, almost choking as she gulped air.

“I know how much you both love your daughter. Now you can show your love to an even greater extent, beyond perhaps anything you imagined. I will invite you to see what I’m doing with your daughter. She already shows the capacity of imagination that I believe can lead to healing.”

“What do you mean? You’ve already began to work with her?” the father asked not so politely.

“No, no. We’ve just played an imagination game when she had dinner at our house last week. I can see Gretchen has the ability to visualize far beyond most children her age, my son included. It was simply an experiment to gauge how she might respond to this type of therapy. I can provide all the medical research documentation to share with your physician. He has already seen most of it I assume. Although he may not see the benefit or interpret the design as I have—I’ve been working with it for years.”

“I’m not sure,” the father said. The mother continued to cry to herself and Papa wondered if she’d lost the gist of the conversation.

“Speak to your oncologist,” Papa said. “You have nothing to lose. And everything to gain. Just so you know, I’ve been captivated by your little Gretchen, as has my son. I’d do everything in my power to see her well again. And I’ll keep our work secret, sharing it with no one. I’ll include you in every session and give you weekly updates. All I ask in return is to see her blood work-ups occasionally, to see if she’s making progress.” Papa waited for a reply.

Finally, Gretchen’s father spoke. “Let me see the research.”

Papa smiled.

 

One night, Gretchen’s parents came to dinner. Momma had cooked chicken rice casserole with sliced apples and peaches on the side. She had apple pie warming in the oven and it made the whole house smell good.

“Do both of you know how blood works?” Papa asked Gretchen and Tommy.

“It’s the red stuff inside your body, right?” Tommy said.

Papa nodded

“It’s like a river that runs through your whole body,” Gretchen chimed in.

“That’s a great way to describe it, darling,” Papa said. “And what color is it?”

“Red!” they both shouted.

“And red is the color of…?”

“The good guys!”

Everyone smiled at their enthusiasm.

“It flows into every part of your body; did you know that?” Papa continued. “Into the tips of your toes, and your nose. Into each finger and the top of your head. And every little nook and cranny,” Papa began to point—and tickle ever so slightly—as he touched Gretchen on her back, her tummy, her kneecap and her ear. He made her giggle.

“Sometimes,” Papa explained, “bad things get in your blood. Like Luke Creamy.”

Her parents both frowned in confusion but did not interrupt.

“And they’re white,” Gretchen said with a slight smile.

“Exactly,” Papa exclaimed. “So, we have to make all those white Luke Creamys turn to red. Let’s release the red snowballs!”

Snowballs? Her father mouthed but did not say it out load. To Tommy, he looked like he was thinking really hard.

The two kids mimicked throwing snowballs and Tommy laid in the sound effects—phew, phew, phew. The both bounced in their chairs, with eyes closed, and they ducked every so often, like they were avoiding an incoming white snowball from the notorious Mr. Creamy.

“Now, let’s build the fort to keep out all those white guys,” Papa shouted. And the kids crouched in their chairs, their hands up now, patting together the make-believe shelter. Every so often, Tommy lobbed an unseen snowball at incoming menaces.

Papa let the kids have fun. Then his face changed like he had a new idea.

“Okay, now a new trick to battle the Meanies. I want you to see that great big fort you just built—and don’t worry, you can build a new one. I want you to see it melt and flood in a rush of red water. And wash all the white Meanies away!  Now! Melt it! Go!”

At first, the kids couldn’t grasp the image. Then Tommy’s sound effects came into play. Whoosh! Whoosh!

“Look out below,” Tommy bellowed. “The dam has broken!”

Gretchen chimed in with a couple of softer whooshes herself.

“Now, look around,” Papa instructed. “Do you see any white Meanies?”

Both kids shifted their heads right and left and shook them back and forth. No more Meanies. Papa began to clap, slowly and rather quietly at first. Then Momma joined in. The clapping became louder as Tommy and Gretchen joined in, and soon everyone was rah-rahing with loud table thumping and high fiving.

Afterward, as Momma served piping hot apple pie with vanilla ice cream to the kids, Papa took Gretchen’s mother and father outside into the crisp, cold night air. They all exhaled to see their foggy breath. Several stars shone, escorting the darker night to come.

“What just happened in there?” Gretchen’s mother asked.

“It’s a visualization technique I’ve used in my practice for years,” Papa explained. “Patients see their bodies and the built-in defenses it generates, destroying the disease. In leukemia—Luke Creamy in this case—the body produces too many white blood cells. If Gretchen can see her body produce more red cells and they overtake the white ones, maybe we can reverse the progression. Gretchen seems to be able to see that happen. That’s the simple answer.”

The look on her mother’s face indicated to Papa that she did not yet believe.

“What do we have to lose?” Papa said, looking directly into her eyes.

“It might get her hopes up too high,” she replied.

“Hope is exactly what she needs right now. The more, the better,” Papa responded. “Let me work with her as you continue your regular treatment. No charge. I sincerely believe this can help cure her. And I think she is starting to believe it, too.”

“I’m not sure I do,” her father said.

“Fair enough,” Papa conceded. “All I ask is that you not let her see your skepticism.”

Papa waited for a reply, but none came. He continued, “Look, you gave me permission to speak with Gretchen’s oncologist,” nodding in the direction of her father. “I know her case now. I’ve familiarized myself with the exact issues with her blood. If I…if we…can generate more red blood cells to overtake the mutating white cells in her body, we can reverse this.” Papa paused. “It’s much more complicated than that, but then again, not really. Her body can heal itself; it just needs to get the right instructions from her. More red, less white, no mutations. In the meantime, you should continue with her treatment. If she were my child, I’d try every possible treatment. Every single one. I’m not advocating doing any less, I’m asking you to do more. Can you see the possibilities? And even if you can’t, will you trust me? Will you trust me to help heal your wonderful little girl?”

Both parents simultaneously took in a breath, glanced at each other, then back at Papa. They nodded.

Not with much enthusiasm, Papa noted, but it was a start.

 

Over the next several months, Papa and Gretchen worked together twice a week. Tommy felt a little left out, but Papa assured him that even though he and Gretchen were working alone now, Tommy’s help was still needed—and wanted.

Papa taught Gretchen to summon the good Avengers in their red uniforms every time she thought about it. Papa told Tommy to remind Gretchen whenever he could. Between the two of them, Gretchen increased the warfare of red over white numerous times a day, even though she preferred to still look at it as a snowball fight.

Despite Papa and Gretchen’s work, her leukemia symptoms did not go away. Instead they got worse. She regularly missed days of school because she was too tired to go, missing an entire week in February. In March, just as it looked like spring may burst through the winter, Gretchen landed in the hospital to fight a nasty bronchial infection. Papa visited and found her tender to the touch and looking frail from weight loss. But he wasn’t discouraged.

Papa studied Gretchen’s blood work reports through her online medical records, grateful her parents had listed him as a member of her medical team.

On her eighth birthday, Papa, Momma and Tommy attended a party in her honor at her home. Her parents and grandparents were the only others to attend. Gretchen lay on the couch the entire time, even to open presents and eat her cake. Her mother and father looked worse than she did, with fatigue etched all over their faces and with noticeable dark circles around their eyes, blackened by the unrelenting disease and fading hope. No light shone through their eyes.

After the party, Papa asked to see Gretchen alone in her bedroom. Her parents were hesitant at first but finally said yes.

As Papa sat on the edge of the bed, he looked deep into the little girl’s eyes. He saw sadness, but he didn’t think she’d given up.

“Now is the time, Gretchen,” he began. She raised her chin and looked into his eyes.

“You’ve been too nice. To the Meanies. Now is the time they must be eliminated.”

She had a worried look and began to breathe more quickly.

“I know,” he continued almost in a whisper. “I know you haven’t wanted to…destroy them. Just beat them back with a few red snowballs. It’s not mean to destroy them. They are the Meanies!” his voicing rising now. “And they are making you feel bad. They must be put to…death, wiped away. They cannot stay any longer. Do you understand?”

She nodded but looked like she might cry.

“Yes, I know. It’s scary. But you can do this. You can drive the Meanies away! Only you. You have the heart to do it, I know. You’re a very, very strong young lady, even though you might not feel like it right now. You’ll have help. All those snowballs you’ve got stored away in the fort? Can you see them?”

She closed her eyes and gritted her teeth. Then she nodded.

“And all those that Tommy made? Can you see them, too?”

Another nod.

“And can you see all the red rivers running through your body? All the good Avenger red rivers of your blood, into every part of your body. Your fingers. Your toes. Your ears. Your head, your tummy, your arms, your legs, your knees, your feet, your hands. Can you see those red rivers, child? Can you?”

“I can see them!” she shouted.

“Now, Gretchen! Now! Release all those snowballs! Release them! Flood the red rivers with all those snowballs! Go, child go! Wipe away those Meanies. They are mean and nasty, and they do not belong in your body anymore!”

She was breathing hard now, concentrating all her inner strength.

“More Gretchen! More snowballs. Release them all! Now! Now!” Papa was in a feverish stance, kneeling beside the bed, his fists balled tightly, one arm pumping up and down.

“Now, more flood, Gretchen! More flood! Go, go!”

“I will destroy you, you Meanies!” the little girl yelled.

Both her parents were now at her bedroom door. But they didn’t enter. Her mother sobbed silently. Her father’s fists were up against the door and his head sagged between his outreached arms.

“More snowballs! Release the snowballs, Gretchen!” Papa shouted one more time. Together they continued to blast away at the Meanies, bringing all the resources the little girl could summon. Finally, she lay back on her pillow, exhausted. Papa unclenched his fists, breathed deeply, and nodded toward the young girl.

“Well done. Very well done,” he said.

 

Three weeks later, at ten o’clock at night, Papa heard the phone ring. He thought it was a little late for a phone call. Only bad things are conveyed this late at night, he thought, as he reached for the phone.

“It’s me,” Gretchen’s father said, his voice at a pitch Papa hadn’t heard before. “Have you seen the latest blood work report?”

“No,” Papa admitted. “I checked this afternoon, but it hadn’t been posted.

“It was just added, ten minutes ago.”

“It’s time again,” the father said. “It’s time…right now! It’s time to start making more snowballs!”

“Wha…?” Papa asked.

“Because they’re working. Those snowballs are working. Can you believe it? They are, I know they are.”

The smile burst across Papa’s face. “Hallelujah.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author’s note: I’ve used the headache technique myself many times over the years within my family. Try it please; it works, especially on stress-related headaches. The visualization technique depicted in this story I first discovered in the writings of Bernie S. Siegel, M.D., beginning with his book Peace, Love & Healing. Now retired from his medical practice and in his late 80s, his landmark work with many aspects of cancer treatment you may see as outside “accepted treatments techniques” and yet he has shown proven results. I hope his work continues; deadly diseases should be attacked with all the abilities within our arsenal.

11 Comments
  • Susan Kilburn
    Posted at 23:22h, 11 July Reply

    Bruce K( not W), all joking aside, I loved your story. I worked as an oncology educator and mind and attitude plays a huge role as well as humor and compassion. All of these attributes you included in this heartwarming work. I love Bernie Siegel and his interventions and thought processes. I have had breast cancer twice, I have used those techniques. It is important that you included the approach of family support and of a guide. Thank you for taking the time to share your work and “red snowballs”.

    • Bruce Kirkpatrick
      Posted at 21:10h, 12 July Reply

      Sue, it took me a second to remember that Bruce Willis joke!

  • Linda Sippy Olmstead
    Posted at 01:10h, 12 July Reply

    I loved your story. Mind over matter and family support , Faith and believing…great story Bruce

  • Brenda Miller Dickenson
    Posted at 03:04h, 12 July Reply

    Thanks Bruce, I had the worse headache today, it does feel some better! Faith helps a lot and visualizing seems to help some, so I will keep it up. The faith of a child is what we need to have.

    • Bruce Kirkpatrick
      Posted at 21:09h, 12 July Reply

      Now try the technique, Brenda, on somebody else. It works great that way!

  • Kenneth fitzsimmons
    Posted at 20:59h, 12 July Reply

    Bruce I loved the story it gives me inspiration to try this for myself

    • Bruce Kirkpatrick
      Posted at 21:08h, 12 July Reply

      Sometimes it works best Kenny, if somebody else asks you to describe the color & size. Never tried it on myself.

  • Lisa Zimmerer
    Posted at 16:58h, 13 July Reply

    What a wonderful story Bruce! The power of ones mind coupled with friends and family support can make a difference.

    • Bruce Kirkpatrick
      Posted at 18:22h, 13 July Reply

      Thanks, Lisa. Good to hear from you; hope you’re doing well.

  • Rosemary Gladstone
    Posted at 13:19h, 23 September Reply

    What a beautiful story. Please keep spreading that positive insight. My Mom, Dad and Sister have all died from cancer. I have both thought and visualized for a long time that those were the genes that I did not inherit. I missed out on some good ones…like beautiful teeth, but I will keep thinking I missed out on the “Meanies.” Thanks Bruce!

    P.S. – I should have been an editor…Mrs. Miller’s English Classes!! I found only one typo… Mrs. Miller would be so proud of you!!

    Papa taught Gretchen to summon the good Avengers in their red uniforms every time she though about it

    • Bruce Kirkpatrick
      Posted at 14:32h, 23 September Reply

      Thanks, Rosemary! I appreciate your feedback and good thoughts–both for the story and your life. I’ll fix the typo! Take care, Bruce

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